A Fight for their lives

Ive been studying guys, or men to be exact. I never draw older male characters, so its hard for me to find that middle line of almost adult young man. Anyway this is my OC and jane having a bit of a tiff. Im trying to find a consistant look for him but its kinda hard for some reason. I know her sword is a bit short, pay no mind, i got tired and didnt want to redraw them further from eachother to solve the issue. aaaaand lazy coloring blah the green spaces are for some text when i get around to it